Then one sees their editor is actually intelligent … after seeing how they cleverly edited your brilliant work! To make it sound so much better.
I have been objective about the Star Wars films since the new batch that started with The Phantom Menace in 1999. I tended to see the style and tone of the films even if coming up short in some if not many respects. Wasn’t Rogue One overrated. And I am still not going to embrace the Force. There is something else. I can’t embrace any of the new characters as I could with the original trilogy.Continue reading “It’s not disillusionment, though”
Just when the author seemed to have put his foot in it, the subsequent sentences doesn’t confirm that, but the context brings out more definition and clarity. And it sounds just right.Continue reading “Just when it seemed …”
Not alternative endings to stories, but alternative endings to sequences. There seems too many possible alternatives, but one must sift through them and see how each one lines up. Character arc should be considered.