This week I’ve been turning paragraphs around in terms of their arrangement within the paragraph. But what about swapping two paragraphs around, so that the bottom paragraph goes at the top and the top paragraph goes to the bottom.
As there are only two paragraphs in this piece this isn’t a case of plowing through many paragraphs to see if swapping top to bottom wouldn’t make cohesive sense.
Even so I risked the possibility of losing the sense of this two paragraph piece. But it sounded better when I swapped them.